Who-ker Improvement

Is it, an improvement?
Ah well, what would really cement its who-ker-ness would be colouring in the sails the traditional deep red/brown colour...but I am curtailed by my artistic determination to keep the images to simple line drawings. Amn't I?!
But dammit anyway if that little sailor-man doesn't look absolutely ridiculous, pffffff :(

Step 2: Refined

Because in fact the trees out here in Connemara have a really distinctive shape, hunched away from the winds off the sea...and I think this is a closer match to that shape.
The funky shadowy lines, however, I can't pretend have any artistic relevence - they are left behind by my wrinkly tracing paper and cheap scanner! Modern technology my tóin!